Trifextra again. I think I’m addicted.
This weekend’s challenge was both open and tight: For the weekend prompt we’re asking for exactly 33 words of dialogue.
My humble offering:
You did what? Ya, I did. But really, it’s not that bad. Come closer so I can tell you why I did it. Are you kiddin me? Isn’t that how you did it?
Ooo! Creepy!
Sneaky one that. “pull my finger…”
Come a bit closer, I can’t reach your finger.
Those famous last words by the wolf. Good thing Little Red Riding Hood knew better…
Wasn’t she a sly, cynical little chippy! ;-0
Intriguing – what did s/he do? Really enjoyed this.
I dunno. I’m not sure I want to know. Thanks.
Ooooh! A Sweeney Todd vibe! So deliciously nefarious.
Oh my! Now THAT is a compliment! Thanks!
This one made me laugh, sounded like a bit of a tease.
Be careful, Tara . . .
Trying to trick at every turn. Well done!
Tricksters have all the fun!
You’ve managed to build a ton of suspense and intrigue in just 33 words! Great job!
Thanks so much Suzanne. You made my day.
Yeah. Like the others., I’d be cautious. But I want to know more.
Thanks Lumdog. That’s a wise approach.
I also want to know what “it” is, because my mind is really playing tricks.
Good! That’s what I was hoping for. Thanks for reading & commenting!
I love these 33-word jobs: so much said in such a little space.
They are fun, aren’t they. Easy to do, fun to read.
Oh excellent – well thought out.
Thanks, Sandra. It’s hard to go wrong in 33 words! ;p
It *is* addicting, isn’t it?! lol
Awesome piece. I think I’ll keep my distance, if you don’t mind… (:
I think that’s a wise decision!
Thanks!
Am not going to come closer,lol!Reminds me funnily of the famous,”come into my parlour”said the spider to the fly..am sure this one is a shady character;-)A clever use of the prompt-leaving the reader hanging:-)
Thanks so much. I applaud your caution!
Hehe.. This one needs a sequel for sure and then we’ll all know ..:-) Nicely done.
Thanks! Glad I shut up before I bored you to death.
come into my parlor – said the spider to the fly.
nicely done.
Yup! Thanks for the encouragement.
Well, I’m nosy…I want to know what “it” is!
That might getcha into trouble!
? What did they do??? Kill someone? Fart in someone’s face?
Wouldn’t we like to know? ;-o
What did he do? I really want to know! loved it.
Interesting that for you it was a he! ?
I guess in my life it usually is a he.
I agree with Sybil! Back slowly out of the room – haha!
I agree with you and sybil! Smart ones, we are.
I like it I like it. Not sure why;
I guess partly because you did it.
But for God’s sake would you finish it
and tell us what you did!
Come closer, Bob….don’t be afraid….I won’t hurt you…..
Don’t come closer ! It’s a trick !
Aha. Someone got it!
You’re a clever one, Sybil.