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This weekend’s challenge from our friends at Trifecta: exactly 33 of your own words plus the following three words:
- charge
- century
- lost
So 33 of yours plus 3 of ours means that everyone will have a 36 word response this time around.
What will Rhea find?
A charge of anxiety danced up her spine, radiated to her fingertips, as Rhea stepped across the threshold of the pulsing time machine. What essential part of herself had been lost during that long ago century?
chamblee54 said:
To find out, she will die, Rhea.
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rangewriter said:
Doomed, she is!Thanks for dropping by.
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deanabo said:
ohh, Love the suspense of not knowing..
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rangewriter said:
Me too! 😉
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Arindam said:
as always, Very Creative!! 🙂
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rangewriter said:
Thanks, Arindam!
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Glenda Hornig said:
I love it! You are so good Linda!
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rangewriter said:
Thanks, Glenda. I think that, till I read the other entries! ;-o
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reneejohnsonwrites said:
Another winning challenge Linda. Yeah!
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rangewriter said:
Well, I’m happy if it won your approval, anyway! 😉
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Draug419 said:
Yay another time traveler! (: Awesome job.
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rangewriter said:
Yeah, but your time traveling tale is so much more complete!
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trifectawriting said:
That first sentence is great. She should be careful, though…
Thanks for linking up!
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rangewriter said:
Thanks! You know what curiosity does… 😉
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Linda Vernon said:
Oh I like the past that’s suggested here! intriguing!
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rangewriter said:
I hope she likes what she finds! 🙂
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jannatwrites said:
I like the how the charge danced up her spine. The time machine doesn’t sound like a good idea…
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Valerie said:
I love idea of Rhea going back in time to find a part of herself. Very intriguing and very cool!
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rangewriter said:
Thanks, Valerie. I think a lot of us have had the same idea this week.
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Dana said:
“anxiety danced up her spine, radiated to her fingertips” … Amazing line! What did Rhea find? I need to know!
Awesome writing, Linda!!!
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rangewriter said:
Oh dear, I do not know what she found! I need to know as well. Thanks a million for taking the time to comment.
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atrm61 said:
How scary!love it:-)
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rangewriter said:
Delighted to please!
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atrm61 said:
🙂
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Sandra Parsons said:
Oh, I would like to read the whole novel! You never fail to wake my curiosity, Linda.
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rangewriter said:
Oh thanks, Sandra. I wake my own curiosity as well. It’s in the followup that I fail, which is, I suppose, why these 33 word challenges are so much fun for me.
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lovethebadguy said:
Ohhh dear, never mess with Time…
Great use of the prompt words. 🙂
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rangewriter said:
Time seems to have a way of getting the last laugh…!
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steph said:
Anxiety danced. Maybe its a good outcome. Maybe she gets to start anew. Intriguing as time travel tends to be.
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rangewriter said:
We’ll just never know…
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ramshanasir said:
Ooh I’d love to know what she’d find out! The possibilities are endless..great piece!.
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rangewriter said:
The possibilities are endless, aren’t they! Thanks for dropping by and commenting.
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sybil said:
What a grabber that is.
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rangewriter said:
Thanks, Sybil!
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Dia said:
I thought you didn’t like science fiction? 🙂
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rangewriter said:
I am not responsible for what my fingers type.
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